I like those. They sound good on the paper. As in my answer to Deb, now you need to run them again and again whenever you have an opportunity and see what works best for what person. Judge quickly the VL of that person in front of you and be willing to switch to another pitch mid-stream.
In other words, repeat them so many times that you can say them in your sleep to any person. They will become you and part of who you are. That’s the goal. It’s not hard as you know that what you claim you can achieve and it is true so congruency is there. And at unconscious level your congruency will go through.