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Hi Lynn, in general they sound good. Run them live with people and see if and what kind of reaction you get. As you practice them live, you will change a word here and there if necessary until you get the results you want (I.e. The reaction you want from people which is immediate interest).
A little feedback if I may about this one:
“I help corporate teams resolve conflicts, align their values and create success using the latest mind strategies and techniques. is this something your company would be interested in or not?”
Reading it and putting myself in the position of your customer and hearing this, I am not motivated as something is missing. After the words “strategies and techniques” I would add something like “leading to much better revenue, retention and team work”. Read also the answer I gave Cristina about the use of words in the forum called “Project No 8 – Ongoing until complete” The use of language patterns in creating your elevator pitch is extremely valuable.
Let me know how it goes.