Naturally, Elevator Pitches evolve the more you speak them out and you see what feels aligned with your personality and what sticks/leaves an impression with your audience.
Writing them down like this just give your mind the flexibility of choice and previous rehearsal. When you’re live on the spot you’ll probably realize that you’ve made a hybrid of 3 pitches and you’d have been glad you did this exercise.
That’s how it works for me.
Some people won’t even open their mouth if they didn’t memorize a small paragraph. This is about preparation and knowing yourself to set yourself up for success!