And some feedback from Mark Halwani for you Ben :
Mark Halwani, [03.08.21 13:34]
The message is powerful.
1. I would move the text over to the left of the page, because on a mobile, it has the image showing up first. Majority of people will be on the phones going through it. having the text on the left will ensure the text gives the image context.
2. Market callout, is great. And can accomplish the same thing by replacing it with the main headline here.
“Single? Don’t want to be?” As the market fallout.
3. Main headline: SINGLE…?
Don’t want to be…?
This needs to be the main message, the main hook and while the message is clear, it doesnt say what it does for the person. Here, a how to headline works really well.
They’ve already mentioned being single in the market call out, so the main headline should be, how to…
4. 6 Questions to help you cut through the BS and attract your life partner. This is great. I would just change “and” to “to” 6 Questions to help you cut through the BS to attract your life partner.
5. Remove the click funnels affiliate badge on the bottom right hand corner. Click settings, general, hide affiliate badge.
Keep up the amazing work and looking forward to seeing the results.