Yeah… Will you do this in a corporate setting, targeting younger people, millenials, gen X? It is still a little vague. In general it sounds good and it is descriptive, but from the perspective of a potential customer it is a little vague. See, if I, as the customer look at this I may be in denial that I have any past limitations. People tend to think that the past is the past and it’s gone. They don’t have the understanding of how every past limiting decision or limiting belief or negative emotions is still stored at the unconscious level and limits them today. In fact it may be so deep that it forms their personality, belief system and values. But they don’t know this.
Mia, here is the deal. Talk to people live. Run this by them and see if you have a positive response. There is no replacement from trying it live. If you incite curiosity and they ask more questions “Oh, really? How do you do that?” Then it worked. That’s what you want. Engagement and potential customers to become curious and ask more.
I like the part with personal power. This is something I think will work well, especially for the go-getters in the community. People who want to achieve more, be successful, etc.
Let me know how it goes.